04 October 2008

Mahou Tsukai ni Taisetsu na Koto ~Natsu no Sora~ Episode 12 v2

Oops! I found a major error in the script. '5 years ago' should be '5 years later'. Not sure how I made this mistake, it could have been a translation error (very unlikely) or just a brain fart. Even worse, I missed this on QC because it was very obvious that it should have been '5 years later' from the events in the episode.

v2 script: Download
v2 episode: Download

Change timeline:
1. Added periods to all of the sentences. (My previous fansubs have stripped periods from ends of lines.)
2. Broke a three-liner into three shorter lines.
3. Fixed major mistake and decided to release v2 script.
4. Adjusted sponsor screen text translation. The new one is less literal but conveys the meaning better.
5. Major TL overhaul on questionable TL. This makes the changes major and therefore a full episode release is warranted. This mostly possible because Princess Vera spent a couple of hours working on this instead of homework!

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